Critique Feedback

The use of color in both the White Objects painting and Surface and Texture painting was accurate. My brush strokes in the surface and texture painting made the objects look fuzzy instead of sharp and detailed. This is especially important for the egg shell parts of the painting since the thickness is very thin, delicate, and sharp. The fuzziness of the lines makes the painting look messy and not sharp enough. The value and depth of the paintings were accurate as well. However, the objects in the surface and texture painting don't bond and should form more of a unity with each other. The compositons that were shown in my paintings were praised. However, the background of the surface and texture painting don't seem to have much depth which makes the objects look like they're floating. I just have to add more shadows in the fabric to make objects look more realistic. There is also more contrast in the surface and texture painting than in the white objects painting.